Monday 2 December 2013

DID-3




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"Jaan kay kya keejiyega?" Khushi asked him!
( What will you do by finding out?)
His fingers tightened slightly on her throat as he said,
"Shhhhhhh! Tell me your Name!"
Khushi really got angry! He thinks every woman will pant after him like the Sultry voice he had been with? Well! He had some news!
She simply said," Kyun aap apnay sabhi aurathon ka list banathey hain kya?
( Do you make  list of all your women?)
"Interesting! Hmmmm!!! But you are not my woman are you?" He asked in the same purring voice and added lazily or "Are you propositioning me lady in... a novel way?"

Khushi felt like kicking herself! How could she be so dense! She went and put her finger into his mouth!
Well it has to be rectified! 

"I would not care even if you were the last man on the earth!" She told him with a strange firmness to her voice!
"Accha? Then you wouldn't care much if I knew your name either!" He laughed a little making her toes curl! This man was lethal! Even his laughter was sexy!

"Per... kyun ? "( But why?)She asked!
"Need to know"he said!
"Jaisay ki koi inspector hain!"( As if he is a police inspector) Khushi grumbled but said,"Hum... nahi batha sakthey!"
( I can't tell you)
"Why?" He asked.
"Er... yeh theek nahi aisay ...milna ajnabiyon say!" 
( Its not right talking to strangers you know)
What was she blabbering away like a teenager!
"But you already committed the crime MS. Prim & Prop!" He said again laughing sexily!
"Nahi! Humay jaaney deejiye"( No! Let me go!) She made to move but ran into his lithe body and gasped moving backwards...

"Naam bathao ... chod dunga!" He said very coolly!
"Nahi!"Khushi was Khushi!
He pulled her a tad closer! "Mujhey naam bathao apna!"
( Tell me your name)
"Nahi tho?" ( if not?) She asked breathing heavily...

He bent slightly and his breath fanned her lips telling her his lips were howering over her lips and simply hissed..."There is no choice babe!"
Khushi just smarted at the feel of his breath on her face and said," Aap ko naam kaisay bathaayein?"
( How can I tell you my name?)
"Kyun? Whats wrong! I am not asking your address my dear!" he said!

"Theek hain! But ek sharth per!"( Ok but on one condition) She said.
"Forget it!" He said.

"Accha tho chalthey hain!" ( Ok! Bye) Khushi made to move and was jerked back to him with a "OH No no! Nobody leaves without giving me what I want!"
"I can!" She said with the same sassiness! "I will" She said!... and made to move and the stranger caught her from behind by putting his arm round her and pulled her back saying..." No sweetheart you need to learn!"

Devi Mayya yeh koi pervert tho nahi hain! Patha chalo kal ko ki aasmaan say niklay Khajoor pey atkay"
(from pan to fire!) Khushi closed her eyes!
"Bathao!" He said his body warm against her back, his arm round her slender waist and his breath fanning the nape of her neck!

"A....aaap ka naam?"( Yours?) Khushi thuoght of it in a flash!
"Kya?"( what?)...If he was taken aback he did not show it as he laughed this time a little louder and said," HMMMMMM!!! Ok!!!!! Good! Hai kutch tho...bath tum main!"
( You do have some brains)

"Tho!..." Khushi garnered some strength and declared "Bathaayiye apna nam tho jaaniye humaara!"
( Tell me your name to know mine)
"Hmmm...Err...ehem... Abhi!" He said!
"Kya?" She did not get it!
"ABHINAV!!!!" He said taking a deep breath!

"Ab bolo!" ( Now tell me)His voice came deep and mesmerising!
"K....k.....ka....."kya bathaayein... Kaajal kahengey tho koi Raj banjaayega! Sabhi ko patha hain! Ki kaajal aur Raj Dilwale hain aur dulhaniya lei jaathey hain!"
( If I say Kajal then someone would say he is Raj! Everyone knows about DDLJ)
"Suman agar bolungi tho Prem Aajayega!" she wallowed internally!
( If I say I am Suman then He will be a Prem)
"Puja ka Vijay! Hey bhagwaan!"

Raath! Rath ko Rajini kehthein hain... haan!!! Wohi theek rahega lekin yuk... aur.... hum lungi dance mein nahi padhna chaahengay!!!!! She didn't like that name!
( I will say Rajini! Night is called Rajini ... but I do not get into a lungi dance!)

Hey Devi Mayya Jhoot bolna kitna Mushkil hain! Aap madad karien she closed her eyes and
His arm tightened slightly as he asked ," Ka ka ka kya? Kiran?"
( How difficult it is to tell a lie! Please help me)

"Nahi! K ..a.... ka... ka... ka Sharukh she spat out instead! She liked Salman!
"Excuse me?" he said thickly accented! "Are you nuts lady?"
"Accha let me try!" She said and he growled "Try? What the hell! Tell me your name not some phony one!"

Khushi raked her brains  Chi!!! Meera should have been there! Haan Meera! Yeah!
But she felt she was cheating on her best buddy by using her name! DEVI MAYYA! She then got a flash! Meera? Ok!!!!

"Ka say Krishna" Khushi blurted out!Hey Devi Mayya! Jhoot bolna paap hain! Leking inhay naam kaisay bathaayein? She moved to realise his arm was holding her!
How strange that she did not find his touch repulsive! Not like that lech's touch at all!

"Krishna?" His hand tightened on her!
"Haan! Krishna Kumari!" Khushi said in a rush as her back was seared by the heat emanating from his body!


He bent a little and said "Krishna" rolling it on his tongue and said," Hmmm!Old hain!"

"Ji? excuse me?" Khushi got angry! Ek tho itnah mushkil say naam dhoondho aur uper say... Grrrr!!! She muttered!

"Aur unisex bhi!" The stranger went on!
"HAAW!" She couldn't stop exclaiming in a huff! How very proprietal of him!
"Krishna" he again said that so full of an odd accent that Khushi thought why Amma did not name her better! How would he pronounce her name!It would be K' shi!

"Accha ji... Abhinavji hum chalthein hain..." She slowly extricated herself and felt odd! Suddenly she no longer was enveloped by that warm body which shielded her back and gave her a quiet sense of security! but it was odd that she felt like that with an absolute stranger who she knew nothing about! Correction! She knew his name!

She still did not know how he looked like or anything else about him! Only his name! ABHI!!!! ABHINAV!!!!! Hey Devi Mayya! Yeh ho kya raha hain hum ko she touched her forehead and his voice whispered... 

"Krishna..."
"Ji?" She said against her own volition...

"What will you do about that %$^#?" He asked!
"Hum...er..." she was lost actually!
"Oh! So you will still go after his money isn't it!" he said sarcasm dripping out of every word.
"Abhinavji Ek minute! Don't jump to conclusions!" Khushi said with conviction.

"Then tell me!" He asked.
The nerve of him she thought! But he helped her and well she owed it to him! She simply said," "Amma ko bathayengay!"( I shall inform mom)
"Then?" he asked...
"Then..." She could not think beyond...
"If he stalks you again what will you do?" that was a valid question he asked.

She shivered as cold fear gripped her!"Hum...er....!"
He simply put one card in her hand and said... "Just keep this you will know where to get help from!"

Before she even knew what happened he simply said "Bye Krishna All the best!", and was gone. 

...and then she realised, there was a group of people who was walking towards the Gazebo which she did not notice and he did and retreated before people thought they were up to something in the dark!
He was strange but very affable.
Rude but thoughtful.
Arrogant yet concerned.
Harsh yet strangely comforting! What was this man!

Hey Devi Mayya! Yeh kya pareeksha hain! She just looked at the card in her hand! Bloody visiting card and she suddenly remembered that lady in their first encounter! He must be thinking she will run into his arms for a quickie! Well Mr.Abhi! You are not going to ever see me using this she scrunched it and threw it away!
Then she walked away!

"Suniye..." a very pleasant voice called her and she turned back asking "ji?"
"Aapkay purse mein say shaayad gir gayaa hain" the lady gave it to her and Khushi squirmed and took it before she said 'no its not mine' to the sweet lady! She just dumped the crumpled piece of paper into her hand bad and said," Shukriya and walked towards the reception hall!


A Dialogue in the Dark

He was out in a jiffy coz if Di saw him talking to a woman that too in such a condition he would be in his reception few hours from then- married to the woman-Krishna! What a name!! He looked at his hand and opened his fist to see something and switched on the car lights and said,"What the!$%%^"

It was a pom pom! Oh god! Arnav singh Raizada having a dark encounter with a woman named as ancient as Krishna and who wore a pom pom on her sleeve?
His lips twitched inspite of everything and he liked one thing about this... this... dark woman of his strange encounters... 
She was like a breath of fresh air! 
She was sassy... 
she was meek... 
she was very old fashoined, yet she was quite the tomorrow's woman.... spirited like a wild horse but above all she made him smile... which was absolutely a strange phenomenon!

He carefully put the pompom into his purse and as Anjali joined him saying" Chaliye chotey ghar chalein?" 
( Shall we go home?)Said "As you wish Di" and started driving home!


A Dialogue In the Dark

Khushi finally realised she had to go home and as she was getting down the auto she could hear Buaji scolding Garima and when she entered, she found Preetam sitting with a cup of tea and Buaji and Garima standing before him like prisoners of War!

"Lou Babua...Aa gayi Mysore ki Maha Rani"( Here comes the Maharani of Mysore) Buaji welcomed her!
"Khushi yeh Damaadji kya kehath rahein hain?" Khushi squirmed at her amma already calling him Damaad ji!
( what is this that he is saying about you?)
"Kya amma?"( What mom)She asked feebly looking at Preetam who was beaming at her victoriously!

"Yahi ki thum nay unko Mall mein chod kay kisi aur kay sath chali gayi!! Oo kithnay acchey hain ki tum ghar pahunchi ya nahi dekhnay ghar aagaye!" Garima wailed!
(That you left him at the Mall to go away with someone! He is so responsible that he came back here to see if you have gotten back on time!)
"Kya?"Khushi stared at all of them in shock as Preetam smiled with his eyes narrowed that only Khushi could notice!

A dialogue in the Dark

Arnav singh Raizada looked at the night sky sitting by the pool side at his home Shanthivan! He was tierd! A very hectic day had come to an end and the next day he was supposed to sit with the auditors! That meant a more hectic time awaited him! But he liked it that way! That was life for him and he thrived on creating and savouring chaos!

His life was now on track and precise in the next three years he would expand into media and automobiles and that would make him the No.1 in Indian business arena. 

Life was clear and absolutely flowing with his Di settled happily and everything in its place! He actually could retire that day but for his dream! He would still not miss anything as strangely life had taught him to be untouched by any thing! Money, fame, admiration, hatred or competition! He had seen everything! 

Nothing matched his zeal to outwit!
'Whom?' The media always asked and he always quipped some thing very humourous and evaded the question!
But he knew the answer for that question! It was self! He could not outwit his own self! The exterior was absolutely in stark contrast with the interior! He did not acknowledge his own self as he was far removed from it in his dealings!
Only smartness, slick cut throat insensitive dealings worked with today's world! None wanted a straight, and simple man! They needed artificiality which he showed them in oodles and so he punished them with the ruthless exterior!

Nothing mattered these days as wearing the mask 24 hours had made him partially cynical and very thick skinned to life and its fairer side! HA! But life was unfair all the time with him! He closed his eyes and immediately the shilhoutte of a lady floated in front of him!

She was different! He could not put his finger on anything, but she... was... way off from the people he met and continue to meet! She had that child like innocence in her and  a ring to her voice that proclaimed she was righteous! Who was she? Why did she have to meet him and made him think? He stopped doing that long back!
A smile appeared on his lips... he grimaced... there it goes! She brought that on to him which he had forgotten totally...

Hmmmm... KRISHNA he rolled her name on his tongue! Interesting but... there was no chance he would ever meet her coz well... two chance meetings were one too many! so ASR be happy you met a nice little fluttery butterfly soul that filled your black and white life with some colours his self chided him and he smiled again and thats how Anjali his Di found him and was shocked... 
Coz her Chotey never ever smiled from his heart which he was doing right then!


END OF CHAPTER-3

48 comments:

  1. Wow....thanks for d invi're.this story is ur best work till now.really looking forward to d next part

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  2. Hey @Stories 1408 Thank you so much! This is news to me as everyone says its the mirage!!! But well it feels good people are enjoying my stories!!!! Thanks and enjoy reading!!!

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  3. It's interesting with every update. Thanks for the invitation. Dark BG for DID. Nice!!

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    1. Ammu!!! You are here! Finally!! All my people are fiding their way to darkness! LOL!! Welcome and thanks!

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  4. Awesome update as usual Anu!!! Thanks for the invite, I am following the blog and now I can stalk you lol!!!

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  5. Hey Anu! Welcome! ohho! Yahaan bhi stalking?????

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    1. Haha wherever you I follow you indeed should I say stalk you ;-)

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    2. OhhO!!!!! DO I laugh? Do I cry!!!!!

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  6. Thanks 4 the invite Any. The story is becoming interesting. Till now destiny u n me is my favourite. Time will tell if DID will dethrone Destiny. Will wait Anu to see where your inspiration will lead us.

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    1. Hey babitha! Thank you so much! And you made my day saying DYM is your favourite! Shall try my best to keep you hooked dear!

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  7. Thank you for the invitation Anu ji.. Update was awesome like always .. Abhinav and krishna interesting ..That visiting card .. Khushi can find his real name from it.. :3
    waiting for next chapter already.
    xoxo

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    1. Hmmm Cards are a variety!!!! So wait and watch what card it is Subani ji!!!! Just wait... Thank you and nice to have you over!!! welcome!

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    2. ah haa ! .. looks like you are planing to keep us in dark for a long time .. :p alright then it's always my pleasure..
      Khushi should realy need to keep some items in her purse ..
      1. A box of matches

      2. some candles


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    3. Hey subani don't you dare Khushi that! Then how will I write my story yaar?

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    4. hehehe ..okay okay ..My lips are sealed..
      :p

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  8. This gets so intresting...awesome update

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    1. Siri thank you dear ...sorry missing out on people!... thought will personally acknolwedge everyone the first time but...well...

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  9. Thanks for the invite ANU...
    Loved it sooo much....
    Wow so much for knowing each other's name....n they r stupid enough to think the other gave their real name in exchange to their false names...
    But when is the third chance going yo happen...? Will they ever meet in daylight any time soon...as Arnav n Khushi of course ..not as Abhinav n Krishna...

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  10. Yay! Jyothi Welcome!!! Well just wait and watch it in darkness! Itni Jaldi kya hain? They will always converse in darkness... although they are together in day time! Well thats a aclue.... Keep guessing dear and thanks for your comment!!! HAppy you are here with me!

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  11. Thanks for the invite .. its a lovely story .. everything still in darkness but still they remember each other so vividly... ahhh and arnav smiling just at the thought of her ..awesome....

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  12. Cool...Finally I got access red both parts. It is interesting concept and different from your other stories. I really like the idea of this story :). Waiting for their next meeting in light :)

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  13. Anu thanks for the invitation. Awesome awesome..I just knew you wouldnt let khushi reveal her name. I wonder why he didnt reveal his name either...ASR brains, I understand..Arnav is just too cute..I dont know why but I felt their entire conversation sensuous. I am not complaining. I love it that way :)

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  14. Just read all 3 chapters and loved them!! Not particularly fond of Arnav attempting to sell himself for a contract - kinda not crazy about that thought. But it definitely makes the story interesting. Hopefully they will not always continue to met in the dark and will actually meet - albeit without realizing that they have met before in the dark - hope you update fast!!!

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  15. beautiful update !!! arnav is thinking about his butterfly sitting by the poolside and he smiled.. lovely.. so both gave each others false names.. abhi and krishna.. both have started to feel something strange about themselves in each other's company.. lets see how there future encounters will be.. but that creep preetam is at khushi's place and lied to her family.. how will khushi tackle him as her family is all ga ga for him.. very interesting story do continue soon.. loved the update..


    thanks for invitation

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  16. Hey Deepthi jayanthi and Paramjeet! Thanks so much! Glad you are here and liking it!

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  17. thanks for the invite Anu...interesting update... so they interacted twice in the dark...pls get rid of that fiance soon, he's such a lecher...waiting for the next chapter
    Ni

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  18. Hey NI! Thanks and welcome! Its a dialogue in the dark remember? So thats the crux!!!LOL

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  19. loved it ...................
    i hope there next encounter would be soon ................
    continue soon will w8 4 it ................

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  20. So Abhi and Krishna for now !
    Fire and ice ka lethal combination.
    Excellently scripted and I am so looking forward to more such chances encounters in the dark.
    Bina dekhe Yeh haal hai toh aagey kya hoga !

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  21. No chat window here ??? :'(

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    1. Disha ben I have opened a community on a forum! Will mail the details soon! Chat window refresh karna padtha haina is liye!

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  22. Devi, at last I was able to get in! Thanks for the invitation. DID seems to be a witty one, what with Arnav beginning to smile already. No questions, I'm here for the read!

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  23. thank u so much dear 4 the invitation...
    DID...its such a unique story...
    enjoyed reading the third chapter as well...
    plxxxx continue soon...

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  24. Naheema and smart girl and If I have missed anyone else! welcome to DID...

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  25. Anu first of all very thanks 4d invitation and really looking 4ward 4d very unique writting style of urs, especially DID. YOU ROCKS IT BABY.

    Anu super chapter it was. LOL both of dem gave wrong identity of themselves and especially loved how Khushi was keeping thinking all possible names to give it to her stranger. Dat was d best part I loved it to core dat Khushi couldn't decide any name as it connects to der pairs name [laughing].

    Update soon, can't wait wen dey r going to hve der third meeting. Can't wait to see how more dey'll understand each other more dan wat dey shows outside world.

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  26. Super update Anu. Abhinav & Krishna... hmm really nice. Their second encounter was also in dark. Lets wait for their next encounter. I am really excited to read more. I know i am trailing behind but very soon ll catch up with the latest update. Thank you for this wonderful story.

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  27. lovely update ... a very unique concept. I really am enjoying Abhi and Krishna's conversation. waiting for more:)

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  28. First of all thanks for invite .Read DID1,2,3 like the update especially the first line khusisaid in part3 its so simple but took us to some olden era of simple romantic movie Arnav is right she is old fashioned and her mind talks for name selection .The way u put up the story is unique all in all its pleasure too read keep updating Regards Robesha

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  29. Awesome update. A slime is a slime .so is this preatam. ASR in the world of his butterfly got cot by Di smiling. Waiting to be grilled.
    Last but no least thank u for the link .

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  30. Amazing part
    Both of them changed their name
    Khushi-krishna good choice
    Loved d chappy

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  31. Really awesome chapter!!!
    Liked the way khushi and arnav did not tell their own name and the way khushi was deciding on a fake naam. Looks like she has never told a lie. Arnav was fab too..liked his concerns for khushi. He learned smiling from the lady in the dark. That preetam is a vile creature. Hope arnav gives him a lesson!!

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  32. Two meetings that too in the dark. Both with wrong names how are they going to find each other. Very interesting!

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  33. Story is getting very interesting by each passing chapter.... What is this creep Preetam up to? Awaiting Khushi n Arnav's next meeting... Will it be as Abhinav n Krishna or Khushi n Arnav...Khushi has to join Meera's office soon...will these two meet there???

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